Magazine Front Cover Draft 2 - Click on Image for Full Viewing

After making changes from the feedback received from my group and teacher, I gained additional feedback on this draft from another teacher who was of our target demographic who told me about discrepancies within my magazine in order for it to be more authentic looking.

These comments include:

• Taking page numbers out
• Reviewing the magazine tagline again
• Making the size of sell lines bigger

These comments have been taken into account and have been implicated into my final magazine in the final products page of this blog