A great image and masthead. The tagline needs to change and ideally be shortened. The design is simple and I like the grey but leave a note for the examiner to click and expand or you cannot see the great effect of the border. I also think you should experiment with more colour - not too much but orange or turquoise would really lift this.
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A great image and masthead. The tagline needs to change and ideally be shortened. The design is simple and I like the grey but leave a note for the examiner to click and expand or you cannot see the great effect of the border. I also think you should experiment with more colour - not too much but orange or turquoise would really lift this.
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